Not bad at all. I think, though, you should have covered more of the original.

I was under pressure, so to speak. I will try for complete version for next year. Or maybe a new poem altogether.

Its a good start there prairie I think adding to it next year is a fine idea. Make a note of it. I enjoyed this. To all my friends at PR a very blessed unconstipated holiday. Make that post holiday dump one to remember!
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The Thunderous Crapper 63 Enjoying home toilet advantage since 2004!

A Poolitzer Prize may be in your future.Breaking news has just come into Poop Report.Santa was denied the use of a bathroom in Staten Island,New York and did the unthinkable.Santa was taken into custody and charged with Turd Terrorism.Officers from the 122nd Precinct had to leave Dunkin'Donuts and take Santa into custody after a family would not let Mr.Claus use their bathroom.Santa responded by deficating down their chimney.Santa would only say,''Ho!Ho!Ho! I had to go!''

Merry Christmas, Prairie! May you toilet be full of huge, flushable floaters and your cleanup be minimal.

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www.daphneszoo.com

Well done prarie doggin, this pressure you were under obviously was exacerbated by the beer. Looking forward to next years in stall ment.

Had diarrhea one day--then the next,
Nothing at all. I ate some shredded wheat,
Some veggies, popcorn, and of course some meat,
But still no poop, and I was sore perplexed.
The second morning--no poop--I was vexed.
I ate some spicy foods to get some heat
To roil my gut. The pressure came. I beat
A retreat to the bathroom. Rectum flexed.

Upon the seat, I slowly pushed. A turd
Began its tardy exit from my ass.
I grunted--I could hardly say a word.
'Twas stubborn, but I slowly made it pass.
Kaplunk! it splashed, then I could feel another
Ease forth, and loudly splash to join its brother.

This was a sonnet, of sorts. If it meets approval, I could probably do more.
Corrected scansion in last line.

(shrieking voice) There are a million things that need to be done around here, and you're on the shitter writing poems! My mother was right. I should have married that car salesman.

Mrs. PD

Bravo, P Doggin! I thought the poem was wonderful and hilarious. It sounded the the brown note I needed to hear in order to get me through this day.

And to Mrs. PD, be thankful for a husband who writes about crap and thinks about sex instead of a husband who spends all day trying to convince people that his 4-wheeled piece of crap is better than sex.
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Merry Christmas to all!

Definitely a good start, but I think it should be longer too.

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Merry feeking Christmas and a crappy New Year to all!

Both the poem, and the turd!

Wow, this month the chritmas is coming and it's nice to visit this blog. I will tell the poem at my Christmas celebration this year.

Where's the fucking promised follow up to this, PD??? Worthless, inept layabout...get busy!!!! (no, I'm not talking to myself, I"m much harsher on me...and ignore me much more often.)
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The proper order is kiss me, then go smell the other dog or cat's butt. I cannot stress this enough.

Bilge, due to the outright cruel and mean comments made about my poem on this thread, I slashed my wrists out of self pity. The good news is that I survived, however my ability to compose is severely limited. I plan to wallow in self imposed depression until next Christmas when things may be better. Either that or I'll go skiing.

Well, ok, then...you're excused, this time. I'll need to see a doctor's note next year should you fall short of my expectations again.
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The proper order is kiss me, then go smell the other dog or cat's butt. I cannot stress this enough.

I have started a new one, however due to the late release of my third "ode", I was unable to complete it to my exacting standards. I promise to deliver something that will set Christmas back to the stone age.

I always look forward to your little ditties pd. I did something similar to this but I didn't realize you had done one till I submitted mine.anywho Merry Christmas and a Happy Poo Year!
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Oops I did it again, I shit when I fart, I crapped in my pants.

Mrs. MC, You will be hearing from my law firm Dewey, Cheetum, and Howe.

Merry and Happy to you and to all PR's and their families, and loved ones.

Shit makes me laugh my ass Off, or my ass out

Russell: You're multitalented! You laugh your ass off and laugh your shit out at the same time. I can do this too.........finally, a bit of multitasking than I can actually DOO!

Seriously I'm crap (pun not intended) at multitasking.......

Now I could be multivariate if I wanted to be.

The Integral......(univariate for now.)